[問題]GWD 29 Q14

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Q14:
In 1850 Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights and for changes in the married women’s property laws.

A. arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights
B. arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal rights for women
C. a treatise that advocates women’s equal political and legal rights
D. a treatise advocating women’s equal political and legal rights
E. a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women

Answer: E

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and找平衡結構
刪C, D
看句意應該要找同位語
選E

不知有其他解法嗎？？？

[mimieye]

幫貼之前的討論帖
http://www.formosamba.com/phpBB3/viewtopi ... se+++Women
之前的答案給B
不過我覺得E比較好
同位語必對!!!<---自創不負責必考原則.
ABC直接加arguing就變成Lucretia Mott在arguing
而不是Discourse on Women, 在arguing
AB的for不清楚
不知道是a treatise for 還是arguing for
CD沒有for 不平衡
所以就選E囉!
請指教

[A級垂耳兔]

In 1850 Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights and for changes in the married women’s property laws.

A. arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights
B. arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal rights for women
C. a treatise that advocates women’s equal political and legal rights
D. a treatise advocating women’s equal political and legal rights
E. a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women

句意就是考同位...支持樓上同位語常常正確..但必對不同意....但還是句意為上...
若題目是考結果狀語...選同位就掛了
同位結構C.E選一個....結果發現沒劃線部份耍賤....
只有答案E平衡....沒有別種解法...

[kotokolin]

同位語並沒有必對唄, 有時候同位語是錯的答案, 就像垂耳兔說的,句意是重點
反例是OG-24, 這裡a method無法當items的同位語, 分詞可以清楚解釋前面的目的
OG(11th)-24
For members of the seventeenth-century Ashantination in Africa, anima-hide shields with wooden frames were essential items of military equipment, a method to protect warriors against enemy arrows and spears.
(A)a method to protect
(C)protecting
所以OG說 Replacing the underlined phrase with the participle "protecting" creats a modifying phrase that clearly explains the purpose of the items of military equipment.

回到這題, 未劃線的部分有and for changes=>平衡, 所以只剩下B和E可以選
覺得E的同位語結構簡單又漂亮, 意思又清楚
In 1850 Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal political and legal rights and for changes in the married women’s property laws.
B. arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal rights for women
E. a treatise that argued for equal political and legal rights for women
某天早上睡醒, 想了很久, discourse到底和treaty能不能同位勒? 看起來實在很不能同位耶;-S
discourse - a serious speech or piece of writing on a particular subject (from longman) 不確定該翻譯成論文還是演講
example: a discourse on art
treaty 協定/或合同- a formal written agreement between two or more countries or governments (from longman)

再去Wikipedia看一下Discourse on Women, 真的只是一本書(不是合約)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lucretia_Mott
In 1850 Mott wrote Discourse on Woman, a book about restrictions on women in the United States.

再看一眼不起眼的(B), 用分詞說明LM這位婦女運動者公開的那本書, argue for 贊成兩件事情
1)是 equal political and legal rights for women
2)是 changes in the married women’s property laws
因為查不到argue in 的用法, 我私自猜想 in a treatise本來是擺在後面, 意思變成她贊成這兩件事情放在協定裡
In 1850 Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on Women, arguing for (equal political and legal rights for women) and for (changes in the married women’s property laws) in a treatise.
但若是真放在句子後面, 會有錯誤修飾到married women’s property laws (in a treatise), 所以就往前移變成現在(B)的樣子

於是乎, 我想投靠陣營到(B)
想個題目都得想這麼久, 金害!

拋個磚, 大家繼續討論囉~

[dibert8]

對 (E) 猶豫了一下: treatise 會 argue 嗎? 所以選了 (B), 覺得應該是'人'來'主張'比較合理.

不選 (E) 另外有兩個理由:
1. (B) arguing 是動作 vs (E) 同位語是狀態 => 選動作;
2. 用同位語沒有動詞來的直接(i.e.簡潔). treatise 是'人'寫的,透過同位語來'主張'像是隔了一個媒介.

Discourse on Women 是一篇演說: http://gos.sbc.edu/m/mott.html

treatise 論文,專論

from Merriam-Webster,
treatise [noun]
: a systematic exposition or argument in writing including a methodical discussion of the facts and principles involved and conclusions reached <a treatise on higher education>

[dibert8]

翻案了!
這種句型要選同位語.
(E) 平衡在 for... rights and for changes