[問題]GWD 30-Q5

[bonus]

Q5:
Citing the recent increase in earnings by several computer companies, economists feel that a cycle has begun in which personal computer users, especially corporate consumers, are replacing their PC’s with more powerful models.

A. a cycle has begun in which personal computer users
B. a cycle for personal computer users has begun in which they
C. there is a cycle beginning for personal computer users
D. it is the beginning of a cycle for personal computer users
E. personal computer users are in the beginning of a cycle when they

Answer: A

[bonus]

B: 主動詞分開 -> 請大牛前輩幫忙解釋這條規則
C: there is 囉唆
D: it 指代有問題
E: in the beginning 要改為 at the beginning

[antimissle]

我覺得是累不累贅的問題耶?

A. 主詞 動詞 再用in which 解釋a cycle的內容
B. 解釋一點 然後 子句裡再多解釋一點, 一來把in which 跟 a cycle拉的很遠,
再者同一個角色在短短的句子裡出現了兩次感覺就囉唆了

[hughes0305]

Q5:
Citing the recent increase in earnings by several computer companies, economists feel that a cycle has begun in which personal computer users, especially corporate consumers, are replacing their PC’s with more powerful models.

A. a cycle has begun in which personal computer users
B. a cycle for personal computer users has begun in which they

B they指代不清, 因為前面同時有computer companies, economists又有personal computer users, 而依照題意應該是指computer users, 但就結
構上來看they像是代替economists! 故B不好!

[kaijen]

in which they, especially corporate consumers,

請問這樣的句子是不是有一點怪異

they, especially corporate consumers, 唸起來不是很順

同位語結構可以用代名詞嗎?

[Samantha23]

請問.....(A)選項是否應該還原為 ..... economiists feel that a cycle in which personal computer users, especially corporate consumers, are replacing their PC's with more powerful models has begun.

[dibert8]

這個還原應該是正確的.

[chris8888]

支持這樣的還原