[問題]Prep-T1-Q129

[chikm]

In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and through her
painstaking documentation of East African cave paintings.

A)Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and through her painstaking documentation of

B)Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology by her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting

C)Mary Leakey was a contributer to archaeology by discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and with her painstaking documentation of

D) Mary Leakey's contribution to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting

E)Mary Leakey's contribution to archaeology include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation

ABC主詞都是Mary Leakey -->錯
我想問的是
D) Mary Leakey's contribution to archaeology include her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting
及
E)Mary Leakey's contribution to archaeology include her discovering the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstaking documentation
兩者怎麼判斷錯誤呢?
E的discovering似乎有改變句意之嫌
可是D後半斷的documenting不是也改變句意嗎?
而且D的and是要跟誰平衡..不會搞不清楚是跟her discovering 還是跟evidence of hominid activity嗎?
答案是D
謝謝~

[chikm]

原本用打的不但沒按照格式..還把題目打錯....實在很抱歉
從新打過了..在此請教..謝謝

[jamesbegins]

你搞錯了129跟52題了
52題畫線沒有畫Mary..答案是(D)
129題畫線有Mary..答案是(A)

129的(A)才是平衡 through her... and through her...

[chikm]

真是太糗了...我從PP裡對照出來找破解版中的題目...沒想到竟然有兩題..
不過還是想請教
52. In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology with her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and painstakingly documenting East African cave paintings.
與
129.In addition to her work on the Miocene hominid fossil record, Mary Leakey contributed to archaeology through her discovery of the earliest direct evidence of hominid activity and through her painstaking documentation of East African cave paintings.

her work對應的主詞如果不是work類的東西..
不會造成脫節,不平衝嗎? (雖然好像從中文句意上可以理解)
所以我才會一開始就把Mary Leakey當主詞的都刪了
只考慮Mary Leakey's contribution當主詞的句子
我覺得我好搞混了...@@"

[jamesbegins]

你真的把兩題搞的好混亂....這兩題盡量不要一起看....

因為其中一題不漂亮 ( 莫老師也說52 不漂亮 但是(D) 相對其他選項比較漂亮 所以選)

選Mary Leakey's contribution 當主詞大概就是受了52的影響 這是不漂亮的
In addition to her work... 不是拿來平衡的 後面主詞應該是有一個主格的人名

129.正確答案就漂亮了~~讀完有一種覺得很舒暢的感覺 XD

[chikm]

呵呵...真好..我也想要很舒暢的感覺...XD (怎麼讓我想到Yankee's的總教練托瑞說:這孩子讓我很舒服...XDXDXD)

我覺得是不是in order to "her work" 這個her work對應到後面去,在這兩題中一個當主格..一個當受格..

並不一定要像我本來以為的..一定要當主格來用

所以脫節與否..還是要看句意!?

[kaijen]

你真的把兩題搞的好混亂....這兩題盡量不要一起看....

因為其中一題不漂亮 ( 莫老師也說52 不漂亮 但是(D) 相對其他選項比較漂亮 所以選)

選Mary Leakey's contribution 當主詞大概就是受了52的影響 這是不漂亮的
In addition to her work... 不是拿來平衡的 後面主詞應該是有一個主格的人名

129.正確答案就漂亮了~~讀完有一種覺得很舒暢的感覺 XD

為什麼129題後面一定要主詞是有一個主格的人?
用(D)Leakey's不行嗎? 讀者一定知道是代替her
還是說(D)錯完全是discovery和documenting不平衡的關係?
(D)前半部到底對不對?

[hey]

其實(D)選項錯還有其他的原因, 當題目為動詞contributed而答案改為名詞contribution盡量不要選, 因為其可能已改變句意了, 且contribution是個單數名詞, 則其動詞怎會是include呢???
因此選項(D)不能選, 因為實在是錯的太多了