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文章pimi » 2008-02-17 15:41

76. (28643-!-item-!-188;#058&003706)

By recording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out in an otherwise silent chamber, and then digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not continuous but consisted of individual bursts or pops just thousandths of a second long.

(A) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not
(B) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(C) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be
(D) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(E) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be

Ans:B

我了解這題是在考recording and then digitizing~的對稱, 還有not...but...的對稱, 但是我有個小疑問, 我對於and then前加逗點, 很有疑問, 如果不是三個詞的and 對稱, 而and前卻又加逗點, 會有種補助說明且and後必須是完整的句子

這是正常三個詞的and對稱, 所以最後一個and前須加逗點
ex: Annie has an apple, a pen, and a book.

這是and當補助說明, 在and前加逗點, 且and必須是完整的句子
ex:Annie has an apple, and Bob is very happy that Annie has an apple.
(PS:Sorry, 句子舉的很爛 ;-$

在76題裡也出現不是三個詞的and對稱, 但卻在and前加了逗點, 真的很容易讓人以為是and補助說明, 所以發現and後的句子並不是完整的句子, 就讓人選不下去> <, 想請問這裡的and前加逗點是不是怕讀者誤以為,and then digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers是跟as they were slowly stretched out in an otherwise silent chamber做對稱????
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Re: PP1-76

文章Huang Hsin-Yi » 2008-02-17 16:30

pimi \$m[1]:76. (28643-!-item-!-188;#058&003706)

By recording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out in an otherwise silent chamber, and then digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not continuous but consisted of individual bursts or pops just thousandths of a second long.

(A) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not
(B) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(C) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be
(D) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(E) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be

Ans:B

我了解這題是在考recording and then digitizing~的對稱, 還有not...but...的對稱, 但是我有個小疑問, 我對於and then前加逗點, 很有疑問, 如果不是三個詞的and 對稱, 而and前卻又加逗點, 會有種補助說明且and後必須是完整的句子

and then 和前面by recording 表動作前後

透過紀錄聲音......在放到電腦數位與分析........., 科學家........

這是正常三個詞的and對稱, 所以最後一個and前須加逗點
ex: Annie has an apple, a pen, and a book.

這是and當補助說明, 在and前加逗點, 且and必須是完整的句子
ex:Annie has an apple, and Bob is very happy that Annie has an apple.
(PS:Sorry, 句子舉的很爛 ;-$

此處的 and then digitizing ....是和 by recording....大平行,做為a team of的修飾o 又 digitizing and analyzing 兩個同在電腦上處理動作,是為小平行
總而言之,a team of...前的兩句形容詞片語為大平行中的小平行




在76題裡也出現不是三個詞的and對稱, 但卻在and前加了逗點, 真的很容易讓人以為是and補助說明, 所以發現and後的句子並不是完整的句子, 就讓人選不下去> <, 想請問這裡的and前加逗點是不是怕讀者誤以為,and then digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers是跟as they were slowly stretched out in an otherwise silent chamber做對稱????
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文章pimi » 2008-02-17 17:46

感激回覆


所以大大的意思是說and前加逗點是為了表達前後動作, 所以才加逗點的嗎???
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文章Huang Hsin-Yi » 2008-02-17 18:04

and then前加逗點是為點名和 by recording 大平行這樣句意很順

若沒逗點為了顧及平行de中的the sound比較適合,但句意很怪


同理
47. By providing such services as mortgages, home improvement loans, automobile loans, financial advice, and staying within the metropolitan areas, Acme Bank has become one of the most profitable savings banks in the nation,

(A) financial advice, and staying

(B) financial advice, and by staying

(C) and financial advice, staying

(D) and financial advice, and staying

(E) and financial advice, and by staying


Ans:E
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文章lichard » 2008-04-26 21:02

By recording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out in an otherwise silent chamber, and then digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists
found the noise not
continuous but consisted of individual bursts or pops just thousandths of a second long.

(A) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not
(B) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(C) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be
(D) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found that
the noise was not
(E) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be
Ans:B
答案A 中prep筆記有提到not ...but的結構不平行
但正解b中NOT...BUT的結構跟A也是完全一樣啊
請問一下要怎麼 看NOT...BUT結溝平行與否???
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文章charlie6989 » 2008-05-30 16:40

lichard \$m[1]:By recording the noise of crinkled wrappers as they were slowly stretched out in an otherwise silent chamber, and then digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists
found the noise not
continuous but consisted of individual bursts or pops just thousandths of a second long.

(A) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not
(B) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found that the noise was not
(C) digitizing and analyzing the sound emissions on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be
(D) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found that
the noise was not
(E) the sound emissions were digitized and analyzed on computers, a team of scientists found the noise not to be
Ans:B
答案A 中prep筆記有提到not ...but的結構不平行
但正解b中NOT...BUT的結構跟A也是完全一樣啊
請問一下要怎麼 看NOT...BUT結溝平行與否???



這題我也有同樣的問題
;-S
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文章ad264 » 2008-05-30 16:57

因為平衡要接一樣詞性
這一題consisted不是adj而是過去式動詞

consist: The buffet consisted of several different Indian dishes.

也就是說found sth adj 但是選項變成 not adj. but V.
Look on the bright side
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