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[問題]OG259

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[問題]OG259

文章puthing » 2005-09-05 13:00

259. Five fledgling sea eagles left their nests in western Scotland this summer, bringing to 34 the number of wild birds successfully raised since transplants from Norway began in 1975.


(A) bringing
(B) and brings
(C) and it brings
(D) and it brought
(E) and brought

Ans:(A)

小弟有以下一些疑點

1、本句採用分詞構句bring是因為兩原因
a. 表同時發生
b. 表前後因果


但其實只需兩條件有一發生,即應用分詞構句
這樣理解對嗎?

2、菜鳥手冊上說(粉刺結構的話,since 從句或狀語不用完成時可以)

好像是在解釋為何since不用完成式

但實在看不懂他的用語
還請大家幫忙一下

3、這句的翻譯是不是說:

五隻海鷹離開蘇格蘭海岸的巢,

造成自從1934年就從挪威移居來此的34種鳥類數量增加


(意思是說掠食者離開之後,其他鳥類的數量增加了)

那這跟少小離家老大回有什麼關係阿? *-)

(之前有牛人這樣說明這題

http://www.formosamba.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?t=1407

OG154的第一頁最下面)

我不知道是不是我理解or翻譯有誤


請大家指教

謝謝!
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http://www.formosamba.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?t=8118

I hope the link will bring you some fresh idea.
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文章puthing » 2005-09-06 11:23

用菜鳥OG對分詞構句的部份做了個人整理

請多批評指教



分詞構句在句首

44. Using a Doppler ultrasound device, fetal heartbeats can be detected by the twelfth week of pregnancy.

(A) Using a Doppler ultrasound device, fetal heart-beats can be detected by the twelfth week of pregnancy.
(B) Fetal heartbeats can be detected by the twelfth week of pregnancy, using a Doppler ultrasound device.
(C) Detecting fetal heartbeats by the twelfth week of pregnancy, a physician can use a Doppler ultrasound device.
(D) By the twelfth week of pregnancy, fetal heartbeats can be detected using a Doppler ultrasound device by a physician.
(E) Using a Doppler ultrasound device, a physician can detect fetal heartbeats by the twelfth week of pregnancy.

Ans: ( E )

220. For almost a hundred years after having its beginning in 1788, England exiled some 160,000 criminals to Australia.

(A) For almost a hundred years after having its beginning in 1788,
(B) eginning in 1788 for a period of a hundred years,
(C) Beginning a period of almost a hundred years, in 1788
(D) During a hundred years, a period beginning in 1788,
(E) Over a period of a hundred years beginning in 1788,

Ans :(E)

結論:在句首的型態比較沒有疑義,因為不可能向前修飾,所以只要後面緊接著的主詞合乎句意.邏輯即可。



分詞構句在句中

178. In the last few years, the number of convicted criminals given community service sentences. which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have risen dramatically.

(A) sentences, which allow the criminals to remain unconfined while they perform specific jobs benefiting the public, have
(B) sentences, performing specific jobs that benefit the public while being allowed to remain unconfined, have
(C) sentences, performing specific jobs beneficial to the public while they are allowed to remain unconfined, have
(D) sentences which allow them to remain unconfined in their performing of specific jobs beneficial to the public has
(E) sentences allowing them to remain unconfined while performing specific jobs that benefit the public has

ans: (E)
In B and C the verb phrases (performing .. . ) do not clearly modify criminals, because another noun (sentences) intrudes, nor do the verb phrases clearly establish temporal relationships among events. -->OG解釋

結論:非限制形容詞子句改分詞構句,無法清楚修飾前句,ETS不愛用。



分詞構句在句尾

39.For members of the seventeenth-century Ashanti nation in Africa, animal-hide shields with wooden frames were essential items of military equipment, a method to protect warriors against enemy arrows and spears.
(A) a method to protect
(B) as a method protecting
(C) protecting
(D) as a protection of
(E) to protect

Ans :( C )

不是military equipment保護戰士,而是animal-hide shields,所以不能用關代。

49. The cameras of the Voyager II spacecraft detected six small, previously unseen moons circling Uranus, which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known as orbiting the distant planet

(A)which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known as orbiting
(B)doubling to twelve the number of satellites now known to orbit
(C)which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known in orbit around
(D)doubling to twelve the number of satellites now known as orbiting
(E)which doubles to twelve the number of satellites now known that orbit

Ans:(B)

分詞doubling 修飾的是the cameras…..Urans的一整句(發現),在此若用which則會修飾到Uranus或previously unseen moons


120. The Parthenon was a church from 1204 until 1456, when Athens was taken by General Mohammed the Conqueror, the Turkish sultan, who established a mosque in the building and used the Acropolis as a fortress.

(A)who established a mosque in the building and used the Acropolis as
(B)who, establishing a mosque in the building, used the Acropolis like
(C)who, when he had established a mosque in the building, used the Acropolis like
(D)who had established a mosque in the building, using the Acropolis to be
(E)establishing a mosque in the building and using the Acropolis as

Ans: ( A )
establishing 有可能修飾Parthenon或Athens,但卻不能修飾到 the Turkish sultan(因為非主詞),有指代不清跟邏輯上的錯誤。


154. In 1791 Robert Carter III, one of the wealthiest plantation owners in Virginia, stunned his family, friends, and neighbors by filing a deed of emancipa¬tion, setting free the more than 500 slaves who were legally considered his property.

(A)setting free the more than 500 slaves who were legally considered
(B)setting free more than the 500 slaves legally considered as
(C)and set free more than 500 slaves, who were legally considered as
(D)and set free more than the 500 slaves who were legally considered
(E)and he set free the more than 500 slaves who were legally considered as

ans:( A )

185. The recent surge in the number of airplane flights has clogged the nation's air-traffic control system, to lead to 55 percent more delays at airports, and prompts fears among some officials that safety is being compromised.

(A)to lead to 55 percent more delays at airports, and prompts
(B)leading to 55 percent more delay at airports and prompting
(C)to lead to a 55 percent increase in delay at airports and prompt
(D)to lead to an increase of 55 percent in delays at airports, and prompted
(E)leading to a 55-percent increase in delays at airports and prompting

ans: (E)

這裡用leading卻不會修飾到the nation's air-traffic control system的原因,苦思良久,後來發現the nation's air-traffic control system是前句的受詞而非主詞。

253. Analysts blamed May's sluggish retail sales on unexciting merchandise as well as the weather, colder and wetter than was usual in some regions. which slowed sales of barbecue grills and lawn furniture.

(A)colder and wetter than was usual in some regions, which slowed
(B)which was colder and wetter than usual in some regions, slowing
(C)since it was colder and wetter than usually in some regions, which slowed
(D)being colder and wetter than usually in some regions, slowing
(E)having been colder and wetter than was usual in some regions and slowed

ans: (B)

[highlight=#00ffff]可能是優先修飾原句主詞的例外[/highlight],但根據句意,只有用slowing才能修飾到weather;
Regions也不是主詞,不會指代不清。


259. Five fledgling sea eagles left their nests in western Scotland this summer, bringing to 34 the number of wild birds successfully raised since transplants from Norway began in 1975.
(A)bringing
(B)and brings
(C)and it brings
(D)and it brought
(E)and brought

ans: (A)

結論:句末分詞結構最常見,分詞應優先修飾前句主詞。



---以下是參考傷心版上許多牛人(davidlee0222, agk99, etc.)的帖子所做的分詞與關代用法整理,有誤還請指正---

分詞

有可能的主詞
名詞或一整句(一個觀念)

使用時機

I、前後句有因果關係(由改分詞之動詞意決定,EX: resulting,causing,making,etc. )
II、前後句是伴隨發生(同時發生)

兩條件符合其一即可


位置
句首中尾都有可能

修飾
前句主詞(或整句)、前面最接近之名詞、前面數句中之一句
(故若分詞構句有可能修飾前句主詞及最接近名詞的可能時,依句義判定是否不用分詞構句。)


關代

有可能的主詞
名詞

位置
句中或句尾

修飾
which --- 最接近之名詞
that --- 最接近之整句或名詞 --- 由句意判斷
(但皆不可代動詞)
最後由 puthing 於 2007-03-14 20:15 編輯,總共編輯了 1 次。
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文章Pufa » 2005-09-07 23:21

襪!真是超級用心!
不過我覺得這個觀念不要說的太死,
因為似乎沒有一個人能把它套用在所有個觀念上....
遇到這類的題目還是先找其他錯誤為妙。


253. Analysts blamed May's sluggish retail sales on unexciting merchandise as well as the weather, colder and wetter than was usual in some regions. which slowed sales of barbecue grills and lawn furniture.

(B)which was colder and wetter than usual in some regions, slowing
ans: (B)
可能是優先修飾原句主詞的例外,但根據句意,只有用slowing才能修飾到weather;
Regions也不是主詞,不會指代不清。

N1+V+N2, which....的句型裡,which本來就是只能指向N2的。
但是我發現如果是:
N1+V+N2 of N3, which...的句型。
which就有可能指向N2或N3。
http://www.formosamba.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?t=8280
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文章puthing » 2005-09-08 08:45

多謝您指教

同樣的問題我也請教了agk大哥

跟您一樣他也給我相同的建議:不要看得太死

呵呵

真是英雄所見略同
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文章dibert8 » 2007-03-13 12:33

1. (A) bringing = which brought, which 指前面的句子, 是嗎?
2. (D) it 不能指後面的 number 嗎?
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文章puthing » 2007-03-14 12:28

dibert8 \$m[1]:1. (A) bringing = which brought, which 指前面的句子, 是嗎?
2. (D) it 不能指後面的 number 嗎?


我當兵前發的帖子.....好懷念阿 ;''(

1、which在AT裡面一般是代最接近的名詞,且似乎不能代替整句,

而且看句意,這裏好像是「分詞代替連接詞」的用法,因為這兩件

事應該是同時發生的。

2、it可以指代的東西前後都有(代this summer似乎也說的過去?!)

所以可能會造成修飾不清,不妥。


請大家多多批評,已經退化很多很多了,請牛人們指點一下!
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文章dibert8 » 2007-06-19 04:18

有人回了. 啊!感謝.
又複習了一次限定vs非限定的觀念.
很好的整理;題目皆選自經典.
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OG10有解釋不同嗎?

文章lucyyeh » 2007-07-21 14:44

這題分詞構句有點難看出來,OG11的解釋也有點複雜 :PP

此題的B, C, D應該都是subject verb agreement以及pronoun的問題...就不討論了

不過關於(A) (E)怎麼選,OG11的解釋就很"玄"了(之前上課老師也是解釋的頗玄,什麼少小離家...)

首先OG11說
Bringing is the present participle of the verb to be. As used here, it correctly describes an action that happens at the same time as the action in the main clause; ....

如按上述解釋puthing所說「分詞代替連接詞」的用法,是沒有錯的

按這個道理,(E)選也是grammatical correct, 可是OG11又說
Five eagles can be the grammatical subject of brought, but not the logical one, it was not the eagles themselves but rather the entire action of their leaving their nests that brought the number to 34.

看上面的紅字,所以既然是entire action 就不是 5 eagles,
那關代的確是有存在的必要性
所以dibert8寫到
(A) bringing = , which brought, which 指前面的句子,
這也是沒錯的(但要加comma) ,而且我上課抄到的筆記也這麼說

這種模糊曖昧的狀況真令人生氣,所以我選到有, Ving的句子都特別小心, 結果還是選錯,而且OG11的解釋真是前後矛盾... ;-@

看OG11他接在A選後面的解釋怎麼說
The participle bringing correctly links two idea in the sentence.

所以(A)的participle是要修飾前面的那一串字,是沒錯的,還原應該是就是非限定用法 ,which brought

再說,這兩件事情"五隻小鳥離開" "帶34隻鳥"回來的確是不可能發生at the same time,

因此我得到了一個感想,盡信書不如無書,
建議大家Review OG11要是有看到

an action that happens at the same time

就當做沒看到吧!
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文章hwatai » 2007-07-22 00:12

259題不是分詞代替連接詞
也不是which指代整句後改分詞(在AT中which不能指代整句話,只能指代一個單字,雖然大全的舊題目有爭議,不過新版OG都避免掉了)

259題它就是一個很單純的分詞用法
意指主要子句發生後,at the same time (10e用simultaneously)分詞構句也發生
這裡沒有省略連接詞,也沒有省略關代
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文章lucyyeh » 2007-07-23 00:07

hwatai說的沒錯,我想which畢竟還是只能代"名詞",
所以這一題如果真的要補進去應該是代那五隻鳥

其實我是不太了解什麼叫做很單純的分詞用法,因為就我所知present participle就是有簡化"關係子句"的功效,
所以真的看到這種句型都有時都會回推一下,而且我也是聽過好幾個老師這麼說過
為求甚解,我又上網goole了一下
有這個link解釋的還蠻清楚的
http://www.onestopenglish.com/section.asp?docid=144943
我個人的感覺是老外用present paticiple的頻率很高,感覺就像喝水一樣,
我還真想弄清楚他們是怎麼用的,真要去問他們為什麼,他們還覺得很奇怪,很懶的解釋。
(因為我問過。)

在兩個文法對的答案中還是要選一個比較effective的吧!
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文章dibert8 » 2007-07-23 15:34

GMAT 讓我覺得以前學的關係代名詞大半是錯的,不知道我們的老師為什麼要那樣地教錯誤的語法?我花了很多時間跟精神才把腦袋給洗過.
hwatai 的說法是正解.這不是兩三天就轉的過來,要改變一個既定的觀念何其難!
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文章Mafioso » 2007-10-14 14:28

今天複習到了這題,發現 bring 竟然有 cause 的意思!!!(驚!!)

所以這題就很好解釋了
這邊的 bringing 就只是要修飾上一個句子。因為五隻海鷹離巢,導致野鳥數目上升。
"導致"是從 bring 來的,而不是從分詞來的

有錯請指教!
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文章Kal-El » 2008-05-24 18:10

Five fledgling sea eagles left their nests in western Scotland this summer, bringing to 34 the number of wild birds successfully raised since transplants from Norway began in 1975.



中譯:

五隻小海鷹(這個夏天)離開它們在蘇格蘭西部的巢, 使得因為從挪威移植(於1975年)的開始被成功繁殖的野鳥數量成為34隻.



(29+5=34)
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